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Re: Homework w/e 15/8/2011

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 10:28 pm
by Zondrae
evening all, just before I go to sleep,

I hope I never get to the point that I think I am above taking advice. Thank you everyone who has commented. I know I often wander between tences im my poems so I try to check that when going over them. Another problem I have is presuming everyone knows what I know, or trying to explain too much.. I need to find a happy medium.

Also I thought the orignal idea, for this section of the site, was to offer a poem we wanted advice on. It has become something else.
I'm off

Re: Homework w/e 15/8/2011

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 11:46 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Nil desperandum Terry Carpe diem :lol: :lol: :lol:

Re: Homework w/e 15/8/2011

Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 8:25 am
by Bob Pacey
God Maureen, never thought All that time spent in private school learning latin would come in handy.


Well said.


Bob

Re: Homework w/e 15/8/2011

Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2011 6:55 pm
by mummsie
Much rather write poetry than do house work Zondrae, there is no comparism.
Enjoyed your idea of using the prompts.
Cheers
Sue

Re: Homework w/e 15/8/2011

Posted: Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:35 pm
by Neville Briggs
I reckon that its great the way you are stretching your imagination Zondrae. I think you will benefit greatly from trying these approaches.

Re: Homework w/e 15/8/2011

Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2011 6:42 pm
by Zondrae
Yes Neville,

that is what I tell any new members of our group when they say "I can't write to a topic on demand." I usually sugggest they give it a try and see what happens. Within a few weeks they are turning out a homework poem every week.