Re: Homework w/e 15/8/2011
Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 10:28 pm
evening all, just before I go to sleep,
I hope I never get to the point that I think I am above taking advice. Thank you everyone who has commented. I know I often wander between tences im my poems so I try to check that when going over them. Another problem I have is presuming everyone knows what I know, or trying to explain too much.. I need to find a happy medium.
Also I thought the orignal idea, for this section of the site, was to offer a poem we wanted advice on. It has become something else.
I'm off
I hope I never get to the point that I think I am above taking advice. Thank you everyone who has commented. I know I often wander between tences im my poems so I try to check that when going over them. Another problem I have is presuming everyone knows what I know, or trying to explain too much.. I need to find a happy medium.
Also I thought the orignal idea, for this section of the site, was to offer a poem we wanted advice on. It has become something else.
I'm off