Homework April - Perspectives

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Re: Homework April - Perspectives

Post by mummsie » Fri Apr 29, 2022 2:12 pm

Totally agree with all of the above comments Catherine-a beautifully written poem and while it's so what we've come to expect of you, like Terry I appreciate that each and every line seems so carefully chosen. It's hard to single out a particular stand out line such is the quality of the verse though I must admit “misty veils of the past” had me reaching for my pen & notebook( hope you don't mind)-I love what those words reflect!

Your poetry Catherine always leaves me in awe-thank you!

Sue
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Re: Homework April - Perspectives

Post by Catherine Lee » Fri Apr 29, 2022 7:01 pm

Wow, Sue, what uplifting and special words - Thank you so very much! xx

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Re: Homework April - Perspectives

Post by Shelley Hansen » Tue May 24, 2022 6:05 pm

Sorry for my late response to your excellent poem, Catherine. As the others have said, it is beautifully considered and skillfully written, as always.

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Re: Homework April - Perspectives

Post by Catherine Lee » Tue May 24, 2022 8:46 pm

Thank you so much, Shelley xx

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