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BALLAD OF TWO MASSACRES - Graham Fredriksen

Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2011 2:22 pm
by manfredvijars
BALLAD OF TWO MASSACRES - Graham Fredriksen
(THE WILLIAM JOSEPH PUNCH STORY)
(c) Graham Fredriksen 1956 - 2010

Re: BALLAD OF TWO MASSACRES - Graham Fredriksen

Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2011 3:46 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
:( :(

Makes you weep - for the orphaned baby, for young Billy, for William the soldier and the man., and the storytelling poetic skills of Graham.

This is Australia's history - though some choose to deny it. Thank you for sharing it Mannie

Cheers

Maureen

Re: BALLAD OF TWO MASSACRES - Graham Fredriksen

Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2011 4:42 pm
by Heather
A beautifully written and poignant poem. Thanks for sharing it Manfred.

Heather :)

Re: BALLAD OF TWO MASSACRES - Graham Fredriksen

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 7:46 am
by r.magnay
G'day Manfred, a great literary tribute to ONE event in Australian history, (that I doubt anyone would deny but only a few of us dwell on.) Thanks for giving us the chance to see it.

Re: BALLAD OF TWO MASSACRES - Graham Fredriksen

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 2:20 pm
by Neville Briggs
Does anyone know what happened to the perpetrators of the action at Bland River ?

Re: BALLAD OF TWO MASSACRES - Graham Fredriksen

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 3:06 pm
by Vic Jefferies
Brilliant poem by Graham Manfred thank you for posting it. How ironic that someone should die for the powers who saw the massacre of his family.

Re: BALLAD OF TWO MASSACRES - Graham Fredriksen

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 3:12 pm
by manfredvijars
Ross, I reckon all aspects of our Australian history are worthwhile dwelling on for a full understanding ... explorers, bushrangers, pastrolists and black-fellas. Our history has brought us to here. There have been many explorers, bushrangers (and black-fella massacres). As writers I believe we look for those obscure stories that may have been overlooked. These become our discoveries and worthwhile (re)telling.

Nev, I'm sure the answers are out 'there' ... :)

I like Graham's structures in this piece, particularly his first stanza and then his use of the seventh echoing as a refrain - and 'regular' quatrains interspersing the story.
Breaks the story up well while highlighting the "irony" (thanks Vic)

Re: BALLAD OF TWO MASSACRES - Graham Fredriksen

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 7:51 pm
by Dave Smith
Makes you stop and think.
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William Joseph Punch

Re: BALLAD OF TWO MASSACRES - Graham Fredriksen

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 9:19 pm
by manfredvijars
Brilliant Davo ... :D

Re: BALLAD OF TWO MASSACRES - Graham Fredriksen

Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:07 pm
by Heather
More than just a pretty face Dave! In your photo album was it?