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Re: in the end
Posted: Wed Feb 16, 2011 6:15 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Am I picking up the end of a relationship tinged with regret - and the ending not as one would have liked ???
I liked the brevity of it - matches the feeling if I am correct of an ending where all the words have been said and nothing more can be added.
I liked this Matt
Cheers
Maureen
Re: in the end
Posted: Wed Feb 16, 2011 8:22 pm
by Heather
Written with your usual mystique and intrigue matt.
Heather
Re: in the end
Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:33 am
by Zondrae
G'day,
I have this theory that you can find a Beatles lyric for every occasion..
"and in the end, the love you make is equal to the love you take."
Re: in the end
Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:26 pm
by Neville Briggs
Good to see you posting something Matt. I must admit it is a bit hard for me to get my head around it, I have read it a number of times and it's not easy. It sounds good, I'll keep at it until I find the way. You've given me something to think on, that's the sign of a good poem I reckon.
Re: in the end
Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:56 pm
by vwalla
Matt
I sensed a vision of Warnie and Liz Hurley, Perhaps?!
Val W
Re: in the end
Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 7:37 pm
by Neville Briggs
G'day Matt, got the message. I'll get back to you soon.
Re: in the end
Posted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:37 pm
by Ron
Strewth old mate,
With those sobering well written lines I think I know where you're coming from, shall be in touch.
Ron.