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								by Shelley Hansen » Wed Oct 05, 2016 6:05 pm
			
			
			
			
			Goodness me, Maureen!  I think these are the most challenging prompts you've ever set - for me, anyway.  So I thought I'd offer this as my first attempt - definitely the work of a "Lazy Poet" ...
Through long afternoons
more dangerous than
endless duplication 
of pathos
she sat
immaculate
in her
inexorable sadness
 
 
 
I will make another attempt before the fortnight ends - hopefully!!
Cheers (and thinking)
Shelley  

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								by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Oct 06, 2016 7:13 pm
			
			
			
			
			
 Well done Shelley - short, sweet and to the point
 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
		
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								by Wendy Seddon » Fri Oct 07, 2016 11:15 am
			
			
			
			
			Hi kids, 
I am still about, reading your triffic pomes- just working full time for a couple of months 
 
  
I will get back to homework shortly (I hope).
Wen
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								by David Campbell » Mon Oct 10, 2016 6:15 pm
			
			
			
			
			Reckon that takes the record for brevity, Shelley!
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								by Shelley Hansen » Mon Oct 10, 2016 6:38 pm
			
			
			
			
			Thanks Maureen and David!  Yes, David, you are probably right about the brevity - as to the record for creativity ... well that's another story!!   
 
  
Lovely to hear from you Wen - and looking forward to sharing with you again when you get the chance.  I well know how full time work saps the creativity as well as the time!!
Cheers
Shelley
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								by Catherine Lee » Tue Oct 11, 2016 5:06 pm
			
			
			
			
			Well done, Shelley!...I've been in Wendy's boat lately work-wise, and am now about to head to the airport to visit my folks, so not sure how much will get written while I'm away either...(excuses, excuses)...Like Wendy however, I too am enjoying reading all these great contributions
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
		
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								by Shelley Hansen » Wed Oct 12, 2016 6:38 pm
			
			
			
			
			Thanks Catherine - and I know what you mean about time, inspiration, etc etc!!
However I now have written a "proper" homework poem (it came to me in the middle of the night, and this time I wrote it down!)  So you'll find it in a separate thread.
Cheers and enjoy your visit with your folks.
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"Look fer yer profits in the 'earts o' friends,
fer 'atin' never paid no dividends."
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