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Hully

Hard Times

Post by Hully » Wed Aug 17, 2011 2:40 pm

One for the GFC MkII

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Neville Briggs
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Re: Hard Times

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Aug 17, 2011 4:29 pm

G'day Hully. I had a listen. I really enjoyed it.
I thought you had good strong sentences in there, plenty of punch, plenty of vivid expression and the use of the image of the old radio ties it together really well, I think.
Bakelite..I can remember that stuff, one of the first types of plastic for homewares.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

Hully

Re: Hard Times

Post by Hully » Thu Aug 18, 2011 5:38 pm

Thanks Neville,
just been having a site-surf and surprised you even found time to listen given your ongoing conversations on rhyme and meter.....!! :?
Oh well, all makes for interesting thinking doesnt it?

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Re: Hard Times

Post by william williams » Thu Aug 18, 2011 6:48 pm

Thank You Hully You Have Done It Justice Those Were The Days

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Re: Hard Times

Post by Terry » Thu Aug 18, 2011 8:12 pm

Excellent Hully, I really enjoyed that. I just love the musical backing that's come into vogue now, it greatly enhances a poem I reckon.

Terry

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