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Maureen K Clifford
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THE CORRUGATED NATION

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sun Jul 10, 2011 4:26 pm

one that is also done up as a video clip, If you are interested here it is

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v3rCYtV7XYY
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Post by Neville Briggs » Sun Jul 10, 2011 4:59 pm

I liked that one very much Maureen. I reckon one of the best of yours. It's only my subjective view but I thought that your vice, pace, and style of delivery are perfect for the theme and didn't need any " improvement " of background music. Just one person's view.
Have you won any awards with this one, I can't remember. You should have.
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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sun Jul 10, 2011 7:28 pm

That is kind of you to say that Neville - much appreciated.

Haven't even entered it into a comp so the answer is no. Have put the video link up if you are interested - some great piccys on it. Most, of the old property I lived on at Springdale - lots of corrugations there - quite a few on my forehead :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Re: THE CORRUGATED NATION

Post by Neville Briggs » Mon Jul 11, 2011 3:00 pm

I really applaud your poem Maureen. It has straightforward clarity in the sentences, which I think makes it. When they make me a judge :lol: I'll give you top marks.

I watched the video, very enjoyable. I like the one with the emus, :lol: We followed an emu like that up at the dingo fence back o Bourke, they can run amazingly fast.
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Re: THE CORRUGATED NATION

Post by Dave Smith » Mon Jul 11, 2011 4:31 pm

Great Maureen, like the video very much I think we have been on most of the roads shown there.

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