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LONELY ... a rondelet

Posted: Thu Jun 06, 2019 1:55 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
LONELY ... a rondelet .. Maureen Clifford ©

Through open doors
he saw the wet and windy day.
Through open doors.
He heard laughter upon the moors -
smiling puddles begged kids to play.
The empty evening stretched away,
through open doors.

Re: LONELY ... a rondelet

Posted: Mon Jul 01, 2019 4:19 pm
by Neville Briggs
But that's a rhyming poem in the non rhyming section :lol: ??

Re: LONELY ... a rondelet

Posted: Sun Jul 07, 2019 9:31 pm
by Shelley Hansen
So it is, Neville. Perhaps Maureen has chosen this spot because it is not exactly a bush poem.

But I think it probably belongs in ABPA members poetry - do you agree, Maureen?

Cheers
Shelley

Re: LONELY ... a rondelet

Posted: Tue Jul 09, 2019 1:28 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
I think I was having a blonde moment or a bit of brain fade Shelley and Neville - the poetry prompts were in the wrong spot as well :roll: Feel free to move it Shelley if you would

Re: LONELY ... a rondelet

Posted: Tue Jul 09, 2019 6:01 pm
by Shelley Hansen
I will move it Maureen - but as since discussed, the "mis-location" of the poetry prompts was not your error, but mine when I was moderating and locking the topic. Oops - and apologies.

Re: LONELY ... a rondelet

Posted: Wed Jul 10, 2019 8:55 am
by Neville Briggs
O dear Maureen,Shelley, I was just teasing, sorry about the trouble. Nice little rondolet. :)