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								by Neville Briggs » Mon Jan 10, 2011 4:18 pm
			
			
			
			
			I've written a one word poem, I call it....
MONOLOGOS
Floccinaucinihilipilification.
Neville Briggs
p.s. The word means the action or habit of estimating something as worthless, which is probably the reaction of the viewers to my poem.
 

 
			
									
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								by manfredvijars » Mon Jan 10, 2011 4:26 pm
			
			
			
			
			Well Neville, are you going to complete your hippopotomonstrosesquipedalian piece in a rhyme?
(One word is very monotonous) ...  

 
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
		
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								by Neville Briggs » Mon Jan 10, 2011 6:00 pm
			
			
			
			
			Manfred.   It 
must rhyme, after all it is only one word, a perfect rhyme. And it must scan, the metre is perfectly consistent with itself.  
 
Last year at Dunedoo, Milton Taylor did a two word poem. It didn't rhyme or scan, It was free verse  
 
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								by Dave Smith » Mon Jan 10, 2011 6:21 pm
			
			
			
			
			Or this could be the second line in abab pattern
Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolocanoconiosis
A condition meeting the word's definition is normally called silicosis.
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								by manfredvijars » Mon Jan 10, 2011 6:53 pm
			
			
			
			
			Sorry Nev, "a rhyme is a repetition of similar sounds in 
two or more words"
DAVO, I never knew you were a miner!!! ... 

 
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
		
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								by Heather » Mon Jan 10, 2011 7:26 pm
			
			
			
			
			You never fail to amuse, intrigue and educate us Neville. 
I agree with Manfred though. For there to be a rhyme you must have two words.
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
		
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								by Dave Smith » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:06 pm
			
			
			
			
			Manfred I was but now I am a Senior and this poetry stuff has still got me Bugged.
Neville I am following your chat with Peely with great interest, syllables cause me 
stress.
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								by Heather » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:10 pm
			
			
			
			
			Pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolocanoconiosis
hippopotomonstrosesquipedalian 
Floccinaucinihilipilification.
They all sound like types of antibiotics or very very nasty diseases to me  

 
			
									
									
						 
		 
				
		
		 
	 
	
				
		
		
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								by Dave Smith » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:21 pm
			
			
			
			
			Heather you would never want to catch any of them ‘cos ya couldn’t pronounce them for the doctor hey. 
 
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								by Heather » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:36 pm
			
			
			
			
			No Dave, I would just say "I'm sick doc, what's wrong with me?"