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Re: in The Dark

Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2011 7:35 pm
by Bob Pacey
Oh come on I reckon you would look the part and the way I read it I think you would have too much pride to do a half hearted performance.

Bob

Re: in The Dark

Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2011 8:18 pm
by worddancer
Thank you Zondrae,

Writing in the first person makes this a personal sharing between with the reader or the audience and yourself. Very real emotions, something very special.




Worddancer

Re: in The Dark

Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2011 5:54 am
by Bob Pacey
I have read it five times now Zondrae and after having lost many good friends in the Kianga and Moura Mine disasters I can say without fear of contradiction you really are a woman of words.


Cheers Bob

Re: in The Dark

Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2011 6:35 am
by Zondrae
Thanks for the kind words Bob,

I tried to get the feeling of someone who thinks they are safely in their own bed and waiting for daylight, but finds their situation totally opposite. I'll have to think long and hard to come up with some other scenario for another 'surprise' piece.