Oh come on I reckon you would look the part and the way I read it I think you would have too much pride to do a half hearted performance.
Bob
in The Dark
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Re: in The Dark
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
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Re: in The Dark
Thank you Zondrae,
Writing in the first person makes this a personal sharing between with the reader or the audience and yourself. Very real emotions, something very special.
Worddancer
Writing in the first person makes this a personal sharing between with the reader or the audience and yourself. Very real emotions, something very special.
Worddancer
It's never to late; just do it
I'll set pen to paper
Write now, not later
And post it so others may view it
Word dancer is happy
I'll set pen to paper
Write now, not later
And post it so others may view it
Word dancer is happy
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Re: in The Dark
I have read it five times now Zondrae and after having lost many good friends in the Kianga and Moura Mine disasters I can say without fear of contradiction you really are a woman of words.
Cheers Bob
Cheers Bob
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
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Re: in The Dark
Thanks for the kind words Bob,
I tried to get the feeling of someone who thinks they are safely in their own bed and waiting for daylight, but finds their situation totally opposite. I'll have to think long and hard to come up with some other scenario for another 'surprise' piece.
I tried to get the feeling of someone who thinks they are safely in their own bed and waiting for daylight, but finds their situation totally opposite. I'll have to think long and hard to come up with some other scenario for another 'surprise' piece.
Zondrae King
a woman of words
a woman of words