THE STUMBLE

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THE STUMBLE

Post by Cropduster » Sun Nov 01, 2015 6:52 pm

THE STUMBLE

I saw my daughter stumble
I bent down to pick her up
It was instinctive
I did not seek counsel
I did not ask permission
I did not convene a meeting to discuss
It was because I needed to
It was because she needed me
and the love was there for all to see
except for one
who felt I should have called a meeting
who thought somehow they were excluded
who felt they should have been included
who felt they should have been consulted
which in turn has made them sad
which in turn has made them sad
making everyone feel bad
because I saw my daughter stumble
and I bent down to pick her up

Copyright (c) Allan Cropper November 2015
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manfredvijars

Re: THE STUMBLE

Post by manfredvijars » Sun Nov 01, 2015 9:16 pm

How's your back ??? ... :D

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Cropduster
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Re: THE STUMBLE

Post by Cropduster » Mon Nov 02, 2015 12:15 am

Hahahahaha

:D

Heather

Re: THE STUMBLE

Post by Heather » Thu Nov 05, 2015 7:05 pm

Lucky daughter :) (Not for stumbling, for having a caring dad).

Heather :)

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Re: THE STUMBLE

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Nov 05, 2015 7:39 pm

it's a mean game with a child as a piece on the board. :cry:
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

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