Dance with me Matilda
- Maureen K Clifford
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Dance with me Matilda
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Re: Dance with me Matilda
Very well spoken Maureen.
The music track didn't grab me
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The music track didn't grab me
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Re: Dance with me Matilda
Thanks Bill & Neville - the music track probably didn't grab me either Neville but it worked in well with the poem
Took me hours to find something that would work with it.
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Re: Dance with me Matilda
I would have to agree with Nev Maureen ( I know I Know unusual )
I thought the music sort of overpowered your voice and tended to become the focus rather then the words. Perhaps a tickle down in volume or and increase in the voice volume.
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I thought the music sort of overpowered your voice and tended to become the focus rather then the words. Perhaps a tickle down in volume or and increase in the voice volume.
Cheers Bob
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Re: Dance with me Matilda
Thanks Bob - still working on trying to get that aspect right ![Wink ;)](./images/smilies/icon_e_wink.gif)
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Re: Dance with me Matilda
Well done Maureen, (I finally have a computer that allows me to listen to these clips)
I agree about the music being a bit of a distraction though. You have a very good, easy to to listen to voice and wonder do you need any music with it at all!
Thanks
Ron
I agree about the music being a bit of a distraction though. You have a very good, easy to to listen to voice and wonder do you need any music with it at all!
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Ron
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Re: Dance with me Matilda
Thanks for that comment Ron - I hadn't actually thought about that - I think being a dance peom it did need some music but I agree with the blokes - I am not a fan of what I chose but having to rely on Creative Commons work not being musical myself makes it difficult. I certainly prefer a lot of my other recordings over this one.
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Re: Dance with me Matilda
Great to see you experimenting Maureen.
Always tricky to get the right background music and sound levels.
Merv.
Always tricky to get the right background music and sound levels.
Merv.
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