an old timber cutter

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william williams

an old timber cutter

Post by william williams » Thu May 15, 2014 4:59 pm

and old timber cutter
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Re: an old timber cutter

Post by Bob Pacey » Thu May 15, 2014 5:10 pm

A lot clearer then some of the earlier audios you have posted Bill.

I good story but I did think that some of the pauses seemed to be in mid sentence ?

Might have another listen later and see if I can let you know where.

Got a show to do soooooo awwwwwway I go.



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Re: an old timber cutter

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu May 15, 2014 8:22 pm

You got through that without a hitch Bill. Sounds quite natural and not like you are just reading. I think the pauses that Bob mentioned being mid sentence are actually line endings of the verse. I suppose it's a matter of feel as to how much of a pause should happen at a line ending that is mid sentence.
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Re: an old timber cutter

Post by Ron » Sat Nov 15, 2014 5:06 pm

I enjoyed that Bill, well done. :)

Ron

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