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Hard Times
Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 2:40 pm
by Hully
One for the GFC MkII
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Re: Hard Times
Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 4:29 pm
by Neville Briggs
G'day Hully. I had a listen. I really enjoyed it.
I thought you had good strong sentences in there, plenty of punch, plenty of vivid expression and the use of the image of the old radio ties it together really well, I think.
Bakelite..I can remember that stuff, one of the first types of plastic for homewares.
Re: Hard Times
Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 5:38 pm
by Hully
Thanks Neville,
just been having a site-surf and surprised you even found time to listen given your ongoing conversations on rhyme and meter.....!!
Oh well, all makes for interesting thinking doesnt it?
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Re: Hard Times
Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 6:48 pm
by william williams
Thank You Hully You Have Done It Justice Those Were The Days
Re: Hard Times
Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 8:12 pm
by Terry
Excellent Hully, I really enjoyed that. I just love the musical backing that's come into vogue now, it greatly enhances a poem I reckon.
Terry