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THE CORRUGATED NATION
Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 4:26 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
one that is also done up as a video clip, If you are interested here it is
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v3rCYtV7XYY
Re: THE CORRUGATED NATION
Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 4:59 pm
by Neville Briggs
I liked that one very much Maureen. I reckon one of the best of yours. It's only my subjective view but I thought that your vice, pace, and style of delivery are perfect for the theme and didn't need any " improvement " of background music. Just one person's view.
Have you won any awards with this one, I can't remember. You should have.
Re: THE CORRUGATED NATION
Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 7:28 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
That is kind of you to say that Neville - much appreciated.
Haven't even entered it into a comp so the answer is no. Have put the video link up if you are interested - some great piccys on it. Most, of the old property I lived on at Springdale - lots of corrugations there - quite a few on my forehead
Cheers
Maureen
Re: THE CORRUGATED NATION
Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 3:00 pm
by Neville Briggs
I really applaud your poem Maureen. It has straightforward clarity in the sentences, which I think makes it. When they make me a judge
I'll give you top marks.
I watched the video, very enjoyable. I like the one with the emus,
We followed an emu like that up at the dingo fence back o Bourke, they can run amazingly fast.
Re: THE CORRUGATED NATION
Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 4:31 pm
by Dave Smith
Great Maureen, like the video very much I think we have been on most of the roads shown there.
TTFN