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Mrs Mickey's Menu

Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 8:23 am
by william williams
MRS MICKEY"S MENU TOLD By DAVE SMITH. WRITTEN BY ZONDRAE KING

Re: Mrs Mickey's Menu

Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 8:28 am
by william williams
Good on you Dave and Zondrae But I ain't eating there

Re: Mrs Mickey's Menu

Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 8:44 am
by Bob Pacey
Found it a bit halting in places Dave. Probably because as you said you are reading and that interupts the flow. Learning it would produce a better result I think as it will allow a bit more voice inflection at the funny bits of which there are quite a few.

A good yarn Zondrae.


Bob

Re: Mrs Mickey's Menu

Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 10:55 am
by Dave Smith
Thanks Bill

Bob that is one of my early attempts at recording and I tended to rush a bit. I have slowed down and now don’t have to read it. I use it a bit and always get a good response.

TTFN 8-)

Re: Mrs Mickey's Menu

Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 11:49 am
by Maureen K Clifford
It's still good Dave - Zondrae that is such a pearler, everytime I read it or hear it I ROTFL because it is just SO true

cheers


Maureen

Re: Mrs Mickey's Menu

Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 5:18 pm
by Neville Briggs
Goodonya Dave. You're having a go. It's not easy, as I have found. Your pronunciation is clear and easy to follow.
I'm very grateful to old Bill the battler who has helped me a lot with advice on recording.

I hear someone in the background on yours. I wonder how a recording with an audience would go. I've heard one of the contemporary poets do that on a radio program.