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Mrs Mickey's Menu

Post by william williams » Wed Jun 08, 2011 8:23 am

MRS MICKEY"S MENU TOLD By DAVE SMITH. WRITTEN BY ZONDRAE KING
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Re: Mrs Mickey's Menu

Post by william williams » Wed Jun 08, 2011 8:28 am

Good on you Dave and Zondrae But I ain't eating there

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Re: Mrs Mickey's Menu

Post by Bob Pacey » Wed Jun 08, 2011 8:44 am

Found it a bit halting in places Dave. Probably because as you said you are reading and that interupts the flow. Learning it would produce a better result I think as it will allow a bit more voice inflection at the funny bits of which there are quite a few.

A good yarn Zondrae.


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Re: Mrs Mickey's Menu

Post by Dave Smith » Wed Jun 08, 2011 10:55 am

Thanks Bill

Bob that is one of my early attempts at recording and I tended to rush a bit. I have slowed down and now don’t have to read it. I use it a bit and always get a good response.

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Re: Mrs Mickey's Menu

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Jun 08, 2011 11:49 am

It's still good Dave - Zondrae that is such a pearler, everytime I read it or hear it I ROTFL because it is just SO true

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Re: Mrs Mickey's Menu

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Jun 08, 2011 5:18 pm

Goodonya Dave. You're having a go. It's not easy, as I have found. Your pronunciation is clear and easy to follow.
I'm very grateful to old Bill the battler who has helped me a lot with advice on recording.

I hear someone in the background on yours. I wonder how a recording with an audience would go. I've heard one of the contemporary poets do that on a radio program.
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