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The Bush Poet

Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 12:01 pm
by Neville Briggs
One of my early writing attempts. This was done on a hand held digital notetaker, and I muffled the mike. I still have a fair way to go to improve my speaking presentation.

THE BUSH POET

Re: The Bush Poet

Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 4:01 pm
by manfredvijars
Nothing too much wrong with that one Nev ... Just relax, tell the story (read it according to the punctuation) and most importantly - Enjoy yourself while you're doing it (you're almost there) ... :)

Re: The Bush Poet

Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 4:42 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
the grey and gritty streets just tell a different yarn Neville - I personally thought this was fine, you speak very clearly didn't find anything at all wrong with the presentation....well done.

Cheers

Maureen

Re: The Bush Poet

Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 7:33 pm
by Neville Briggs
Thanks Manfred, thanks Maureen I appreciate your comments.