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Is This The Outback?

Post by keats » Tue May 24, 2011 10:34 pm

Hope you enjoy.
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Re: Is This The Outback?

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed May 25, 2011 8:32 am

I enjoyed that Neil.
It's an up to date look at Australia, I think relating to contemporary issues is something we should work on a fair bit in bush poetry, and you have succeeded here, I think, very well.

Things have changed ( not necessarily for the better ) and you have brought that issue out clearly.

I thought your diction was clear, and the pace of your delivery suitable for the theme.
( I'm not a judge and my performance is low grade, but that's what I think )
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Re: Is This The Outback?

Post by william williams » Wed May 25, 2011 9:05 am

I enjoyed it immensly Neal so very true

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Re: Is This The Outback?

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed May 25, 2011 10:37 am

good on you Neil - I really enjoyed that especially the last two lines.

Can't wait to get Mum to listen to this one.

Cheers

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Re: Is This The Outback?

Post by Dave Smith » Thu May 26, 2011 7:05 pm

Neil Mate goodonya I’m with you cor blimy cobber ya walks into a bar an ask’s for a schooner an they ask’s of what, jeez mate they got 5 or 6 on tap an a dozen in tins, by the time they get it sorted out what ya want ya could die of thirst an all ya want is coldie ‘cos ya parched. Jeez I dunno. ;)

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Re: Is This The Outback?

Post by Terry » Thu May 26, 2011 7:54 pm

Well done Neil,
Like everybody else I really enjoyed that.
The only way you have a chance of escaping most of it is to get as far from a pub or town as possible, and even then a few idiots sometimes turn up with a ute full of booze looking for trouble. One of the great pleasure for me is to spend a few weeks in the bush with a mate or even better with my wife and not see another person, although saying that there are still a few great people out there.

Cheers Terry

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Re: Is This The Outback?

Post by manfredvijars » Fri May 27, 2011 9:52 am

The production was great ... I'd keep the sound engineer and sack the narrator... :D

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Re: Is This The Outback?

Post by keats » Fri May 27, 2011 9:36 pm

Ha ha ha Manfred. Careful starting your car tonight!!!!

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Re: Is This The Outback?

Post by Heather » Thu Jul 21, 2011 8:40 pm

Good one Keats. Most enjoyable.

Heather :)

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