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				Blank Verse ...
				Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 10:40 am
				by manfredvijars
				When the Muse hits you and rides your shoulder, you listen and write ..... 
Here is a bit of "Blank Verse" (metre but no rhyme)
Be my guests and 'rip it to bits' ...   
 
BORA
(c) 2014 Manfred Vijars 
			 
			
					
				Re: Blank Verse ...
				Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 12:07 pm
				by Maureen K Clifford
				Not me - I love it.
Have you read any of this blokes work Mannie - he's a Brisbane Poet, I like what he does as well. 
http://www.poetryinternationalweb.net/p ... /LOVE-POEM 
			 
			
					
				Re: Blank Verse ...
				Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 12:27 pm
				by Neville Briggs
				The blank verse looks all right to me Manfred. Your metaphysical ideas are a bit shaky, very unscientific  
  
 
			 
			
					
				Re: Blank Verse ...
				Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 12:35 pm
				by Heather
				That's "Poetic license" Neville.... 
 
Gets a tick from me Manfred.... 

 
			 
			
					
				Re: Blank Verse ...
				Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 1:47 pm
				by manfredvijars
				Thank you Mausie, Nev and Heather ... 
I think our collective belief systems are all a bit 'shakey' Nev ...   

 
			 
			
					
				Re: Blank Verse ...
				Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 4:22 pm
				by Neville Briggs
				Do I hear the sound of Orwellian sheep. 

 
			 
			
					
				Re: Blank Verse ...
				Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 4:27 pm
				by Neville Briggs
				Manfred, I don't know why blank verse cannot take a part in bush poetry. It is very traditional. Like everything it just has to be done well, and should not lead into any sort of obscurantist or esoteric meanderings if that's what worries some people.
			 
			
					
				Re: Blank Verse ...
				Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 5:27 pm
				by warooa
				Surely you don't mean there's no place for esoteric rambling in poetry, Nev?
			 
			
					
				Re: Blank Verse ...
				Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 7:04 pm
				by Neville Briggs
				Some famous poet has well said that the purpose of language is to reveal something, not hide it.  

 
			 
			
					
				Re: Blank Verse ...
				Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2014 8:42 pm
				by Bob Pacey
				Just reads ??? like a series of statements ?
Sorry many not for me mate.
Bob