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David J Delaney

Re: haiku

Post by David J Delaney » Tue Aug 02, 2011 2:21 pm

Let's concentrate on what we all like. Which surely must be, the mystical or magical way in which poetry speaks straight to the heart in a way no other speech can do.
Bravo!!!..Neville, love this part.

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Re: haiku

Post by DinkyDi » Tue Aug 02, 2011 8:34 pm

I've had a go at a few, never really liked the style though.

MORNING ALARM
In blissful slumber
Searing shrieks invade to wake
Time impacts the wall.

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Re: haiku

Post by Zondrae » Wed Aug 03, 2011 4:21 pm

G'day Adam.
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Re: haiku

Post by Heather » Wed Aug 03, 2011 5:45 pm

Good to see you back Adam.

Heather :)

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Re: haiku

Post by DinkyDi » Wed Aug 03, 2011 6:57 pm

Thank you both. Just been concentrating on writing that bush poem I started years ago and finally finished it. Will post it here in time.

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Re: haiku

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:26 pm

Good on you Adam.....well..where is it ??? ;)
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Re: haiku

Post by Terry » Thu Aug 04, 2011 8:36 pm

Hi Dave,
I quite liked your soliloquy, to me it's well thought out with good word selection.

I must admit though I have a very limited knowledge of the soliloquy.

Terry

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Re: haiku

Post by David J Delaney » Thu Aug 04, 2011 10:00 pm

Thank you Terry, the most famous soliloquy is from Shakespeares 'Hamlet' I'm sure you remember this line, ‘To be or not to be, that is the question’, try googling 'what is a soliloquy' I found it quite interesting eh!

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Re: haiku

Post by Neville Briggs » Fri Aug 05, 2011 11:35 am

Next time my wife says to me " Talking to yourself again; the first sign of madness "

I can gently reply " Have you no appreciation for the fine art of soliloquy " :roll:
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Re: haiku

Post by Bellobazza » Mon Oct 03, 2011 3:35 pm

G'day...
I've tried Haikus as an exercise, even though I have an allergy to counting syllables. I know that a Haiku is not supposed to rhyme, but I found that my preference for rhyming poetry could not be suppressed...



Haiku Seasons…

(of Dreams)
Dream, for old times’ sake;
moonlight on Menindee Lake…
dreamers, though, must wake.

(of Light)
Summer…black crows caw.
Asphalt’s heat insults shod feet…
poor dog licks its paw.

(of Darkness)
Spiders in the night,
air-nets weaving, out of sight…
dew-gems greet first light.

(of Change)
“Never defeated!”
In the streets, it’s repeated…
despots unseated.

(of Death)
Pilot whales wallow
in the tidal pool’s hollow
-tragedies follow.


© Will Moody 2010
"Each poet that I know (he said)
has something funny in his head..." CJD

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