Rise - Tantalize

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Maureen K Clifford
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Re: Rise - Tantalize

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue May 24, 2011 9:08 pm

WHAT!!! was I wrong???


She stole my soul with smoky eyes -She used beauty to tantalize –
I heard her words, believed her lies and watched and saw her soft breasts rise
and fall in time with beating heart that dwelt deep in that inner part
where truth was true and lies just lies – her pulse negated alibis.
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Re: Rise - Tantalize

Post by keats » Tue May 24, 2011 9:45 pm

Phewwwwww!! (keats wipes his brow in relief!)

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Re: Rise - Tantalize

Post by Heather » Tue May 24, 2011 10:24 pm

Why, what did you think she meant Keats? It's always hot and steamy in QLD where Maureen lives.

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Re: Rise - Tantalize

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue May 24, 2011 10:41 pm

Oh it is - it is.


Through hot and steamy northern nights – she kissed my lips and held me tight.
She promised she would never leave and all her lies I did believe.
She promised me the moon and stars and silver beaches stretching far.
She promised me all this and more – for her I’d die – I have before.
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Re: Rise - Tantalize

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed May 25, 2011 8:42 am

She flaunted all her sensual charms
my carnal lust to tantalize.
It was her mind that turned me on
her power to intellectualise. :mrgreen:
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Re: Rise - Tantalize

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed May 25, 2011 8:49 pm

You win Neville :lol: Such BIG words 6 syllables no less :shock:
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Re: Rise - Tantalize

Post by David J Delaney » Mon May 30, 2011 8:58 pm

I was under the impression that almost all words ending in 'ize' eg tantalize, surprize, acclimatize are American spelling & we & English have 'ise' eg. tantalise, surprise, acclimatise.

Here you go Terry.

http://www.rhymer.com/RhymingDictionary/rise.html

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