Homework April '23. To Peter.

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Homework April '23. To Peter.

Post by Ron » Fri Apr 21, 2023 7:11 pm

TO PETER.
© Ron Boughton April ‘23

You’ve gone old mate, and there’s times I wonder, if was in dreams
The never ending miles we shared, surreal at times it seems,
Those magic motorbike trips now filed, in the treasured years,
When we had ridden over this land …in horizon gears.
We’d shared a lot of common threads with no words ever spoke
In anger, that is unless, was in pretext of a joke!
And here your larrikin trademark grin, settled any score
And was at times beneath your visor …a safe bet for sure!

Remember Pete, about six of us, shared the wanderlust
And you, were first to buy the beers to wash away the dust
When booking into country pubs, after a hot, hard day’s ride
No matter whether far out west or on the Great divide!
So many happy memories mate are coming thick and fast
As too I ponder the humour in those rides of the past!
The times we’d all been guilty, snoring like sawmills cutting logs!
And laugh we did at White Cliffs, when they called our mob …Wild Hogs!

Your nickname of the Vegemite kid was one that you would boast,
Because you’d trowel it on so thick you’d hardly see the toast!
And all those characters that are, the essence of our land,
Of whom we met along the track …was education grand!
We rode in dust and heat, and rain, and wind and driving sleet,
But in the halcyon days of sunshine, nothing could compete,
With being graced in freedoms shroud where senses could immerse
In nothing but appreciation, of this land diverse!

The good times rolled onwards as did the turning two wheel spokes
‘Til father time hinted that we were no longer young blokes!
As those past pains and ailments, that, of once we’d never hear
Were coming to the fore, and sadly, yours were most severe!
And sadly so aggressive, though you put up a good fight
Until that last tragic fall at home, on that fateful night!
And until the day we meet again, in that faraway,
You will always be missed Pete …our true mate of yesterday!
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Re: Homework April '23. To Peter.

Post by Terry » Sat Apr 22, 2023 2:22 pm

Hi Ron
a very touching poem mate - sometimes it's hard to say goodbye.
Also, some great memories are shining through your poem, you will always have them.

I went to a memorial for a good poet friend last Monday,
and a few memories were revived there as well.

If you're like me you're probably running out of mates as well.

Cheers Ron I really enjoyed your Poem

Terry
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Re: Homework April '23. To Peter.

Post by Ron » Sat Apr 22, 2023 5:47 pm

Thanks Terry, pleased that you enjoyed it, and of course could relate to it.
Yes mate the ranks are thinning aren't they, which can be a bit sobering at times. We certainly tend to be going to more funerals these days.
I guess it all starts to close in pretty quick when we reach a certain age!
Cheers mate and keep well, :D
Ron

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Re: Homework April '23. To Peter.

Post by Catherine Lee » Mon Apr 24, 2023 11:34 pm

Yes, very moving indeed, Ron. So very sad, but some lovely memories included - a most poignant poem.

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Re: Homework April '23. To Peter.

Post by Shelley Hansen » Tue Apr 25, 2023 7:45 am

Well said, Ron - a touching tribute to a mate who was obviously very special.

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Re: Homework April '23. To Peter.

Post by Ron » Wed Apr 26, 2023 5:58 pm

Hi Catherine and Shelley,
Thankyou both for your kind words.
Yes Pete was one of those fair dinkum blokes who made you a better person for having known him.
Cheers
Ron.

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Re: Homework April '23. To Peter.

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon May 01, 2023 11:21 am

A very moving tribute - your mate would have to be happy with that I'm thinking and something very special for the family to keep as well - nicely done
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Re: Homework April '23. To Peter.

Post by Ron » Thu May 04, 2023 5:41 pm

Thanks so much Maureen, yes I must get a copy to his family as well.
Cheers
Ron

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