Homework 25/12/18

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Neville Briggs
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Homework 25/12/18

Post by Neville Briggs » Fri Dec 07, 2018 4:21 pm

carol singers chime
fat santa gives out lollies
children's faces shine
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Re: Homework 25/12/18

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sat Dec 08, 2018 9:02 am

a topical Haiku Neville, just right for the season - well done. I love Haiku's :D
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Re: Homework 25/12/18

Post by Terry » Sat Dec 08, 2018 9:59 am

It nearly rhymes Neville.
A bit like mine mate, started with promise . . . .

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Re: Homework 25/12/18

Post by Neville Briggs » Sat Dec 08, 2018 3:03 pm

Thanks Terry, Maureen. Haiku are like me, not as simple as they look :lol: this one took four revisions until I thought it might work.
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Re: Homework 25/12/18

Post by Terry » Sat Dec 08, 2018 6:30 pm

Only Teasing Neville

Nice Haiku


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