Homework week ending 26/11

All Registered Forum Users can participate in the writing exercises for the current fortnight.
Users can also participate in comment and constructive feedback in this Workshop.

Moderator: Shelley Hansen

Post Reply
Neville Briggs
Posts: 6946
Joined: Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:08 pm
Location: Here

Homework week ending 26/11

Post by Neville Briggs » Sat Nov 24, 2018 4:18 pm

I took as my prompt, the line, " you don't remember me "


WE DID NOT KNOW HIM


They moved my bones from the rust red soil
From the warm and silent sand,
Put me there in a glass show case
Far away from the wild free land.
But they don’t remember me.

No emus track across my bed
No desert sunsets glow,
I lie alone on a hard bare shelf
Where strangers look; then go.
But they don’t remember me.

My bones are cursed till I lie again
In the ochre painted bark.
A stranger now in a stranger’s place
Till I rest where the bright stars walk.
For they will remember me.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

User avatar
Maureen K Clifford
Posts: 8057
Joined: Tue Nov 09, 2010 10:31 am
Location: Ipswich - Paul Pisasale country and home of the Ipswich Poetry Feast
Contact:

Re: Homework week ending 26/11

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sun Nov 25, 2018 1:01 pm

Well done Neville - I love it. There are still Aboriginal remains languishing in museums around the world and the aboriginal people are trying to get them back for interment in their own country, which is as it should be. They certainly remember their clansmen and many believe they will not enter the dreamtime, whilst their bodies are incomplete
Check out The Scribbly Bark Poets blog site here -
http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/


I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.

Neville Briggs
Posts: 6946
Joined: Sun Oct 31, 2010 12:08 pm
Location: Here

Re: Homework week ending 26/11

Post by Neville Briggs » Sun Nov 25, 2018 6:02 pm

Thanks Maureen, just a small thingo, since I haven't had a go at writing for a while.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

Post Reply