Homework we 29th August
Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2016 3:52 pm
				
				She has impersonated someone who is happy for a long time.
She doesn’t want to remember the painful walk back in time
to when she was actually happy.
In her head, discordant music makes memories of
happier times - when she experienced fleeting, loving feelings -
clash with reality.
Reality is not the stuff of crooners and swooners
decrying an elusive concept of happiness
but about coping.
She inconspicuously wakes each morning and goes about
doing what needs to be done without complaint.
She is the real living legend.
			She doesn’t want to remember the painful walk back in time
to when she was actually happy.
In her head, discordant music makes memories of
happier times - when she experienced fleeting, loving feelings -
clash with reality.
Reality is not the stuff of crooners and swooners
decrying an elusive concept of happiness
but about coping.
She inconspicuously wakes each morning and goes about
doing what needs to be done without complaint.
She is the real living legend.
 Different from your usual style but I like it and you have woven the story around the prompts well.  I like 'inconspicuously wakes' - a great analogy.  A thought provoking poem indeed but in reality it is a perfect fit for so many women out there - I am sure we could all relate it to at least one or two women we know.  Well done.
  Different from your usual style but I like it and you have woven the story around the prompts well.  I like 'inconspicuously wakes' - a great analogy.  A thought provoking poem indeed but in reality it is a perfect fit for so many women out there - I am sure we could all relate it to at least one or two women we know.  Well done.