ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

Angela Gaye

My tears are out of control
they turn to rain in my heart
the love there that’s sleeping
while I’m softly weeping -
life ended before it could start.

So few words, Wendy, yet they say so much.

David

That's good Wendy, I always think that to do the most with the least is one of the main principles of any art.

Oh my! The heartbreak is tangible ... nothing more needed to be said.

Beautifully poignant, Wendy. Proof that a poem need not be long to be memorable.

Cheers
Shelley

Yep. What they said Wendy.

Heather

I totally agree - so few words and yet they speak volumes. Lovely poem Wendy x

Me too Wendy. Short but not sweet. You've captured in those four lines the sadness of relationships that set us adrift for a time. Thankfully we usually make it into port somewhere along the way.
Wazza