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Homework fortnight ending 9/2/15 - My Cinquains

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2015 12:50 pm
by Peely
MY CINQUAINS
© John Peel 29/1/2015

Pointless…
A waste of time…
Why be bothered with it?
It’s not proper bush poetry –
Cinquain.

Why be
inflicted with
Adelaide Crapsey’s crap?
It isn’t really poetry –
Cinquain!

Re: Homework fortnight ending 9/2/15 - My Cinquains

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2015 6:13 pm
by Bob Pacey
Cinquain!


Cinquain!

Cinquain!


Sounds Like a bullet bouncing off the brickwork ?

Re: Homework fortnight ending 9/2/15 - My Cinquains

Posted: Thu Jan 29, 2015 7:39 pm
by Maureen K Clifford
Well you did one John :lol: It's a bit like algebra I never knew how to do that either but I always had a go at it - it is about extending our horizons and just a challenge to get people thinking and writing, but you knew that :roll: and you were interested enough to Google it I see. I purposely didn't use Adelaide Crapsey's work as an example even though she seems to be held up as the expert on this form of poetry.

I reckon your Cinquain is pretty good to by the way. Well done

Re: Homework fortnight ending 9/2/15 - My Cinquains

Posted: Fri Jan 30, 2015 11:01 am
by Cropduster
Funny stuff John :D

Clearly you love this form of poetry :lol:

Allan

Re: Homework fortnight ending 9/2/15 - My Cinquains

Posted: Sat Jan 31, 2015 2:09 pm
by Peely
Hi Maureen

No google used in this case, just a good memory and a quick check in a poetry book to see that I had the correct person (Adelaide Crapsey) as the originator of the Cinquain. As the inventor of the form, she should have a good knowledge of it.

Bob and Allan

Definitely not a fan of the Cinquain :lol:



John