ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

Well done Marty, I've got writers block so I think you have done well.


Cheers Mate

Bob

Beautifully crafted Marty - the only nit pick I would have with it is A blanket crimson red and that only because crimson and red are in effect the same I reckon you could ditch the red - to retain the metre you could perhaps use something like

A blanket crimson now covers all of that tortured ground
or
A blanket shaded crimson appears o'er the tortured ground

Just a thought - but WOW what a magnificent write - well done

Fair 'nough - it's your blankie I'm a bit partial to o'er myself so we can live and let live I'm sure.

Nice Marty!
It sure is a good topic to write about maybe because all of us are somehow affected. 'The Cancer of War'.
Thanks

Dot