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Homework 2/9/2013 No one is there
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- Maureen K Clifford
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Re: Homework 2/9/2013 No one is there
That is a great poem Marty and sadly so true - we can never go back - only forge new paths forward. Old loves, old memories and old places though are always held in our hearts. Good writing IMO
Cheers
Maureen
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Maureen
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Re: Homework 2/9/2013 No one is there
I think this one is going well Marty. I think it is better than the other one about memories. The sentences here are more direct ( subject-verb-object ) and I think that makes more impact in our poetry. Well that's what I am trying to learn. A long way to go yet.
Neville
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Re: Homework 2/9/2013 No one is there
Wow! Loved it! Brought back memories for me.
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Re: Homework 2/9/2013 No one is there
Good poem Marty, and glad you had a good visit home.
Robyn Sykes, the Binalong Bard.
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Wooo Hoooo Jakki has a piccie
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I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/
I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.