OOH-WAA!!

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Heather

Re: OOH-WAA!!

Post by Heather » Mon Jan 31, 2011 7:46 pm

Sometimes you just wish you hadn't started something don't you Trisha?

Heather :lol:

Trisha Patterson

Re: OOH-WAA!!

Post by Trisha Patterson » Mon Jan 31, 2011 8:24 pm

I think you could be right Heather! It's starting to look that way. :lol:
Cheers
Trisha

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Re: OOH-WAA!!

Post by Zondrae » Tue Feb 01, 2011 7:14 am

G'day Marty boy

Thanks for that. My day needed lightening. Your brief comment even induced a slight chuckle.
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Trisha Patterson

Re: OOH-WAA!!

Post by Trisha Patterson » Tue Feb 01, 2011 3:02 pm

Hi Marty,
I guess you could call it that...or even "liberating".
;) Trish

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Re: OOH-WAA!!

Post by Dave Smith » Wed Feb 02, 2011 4:48 pm

G’Day All

I’m going to take a punt here and say I think the line in question is correct as written i.e.

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“She made a mistake… with her shirt not "opaque"...”

The word “with” alleviates the need for “ ‘s” on the word shirt.

As for the rest of the banter “such things in front of an old bloke oh dear oh dear” :oops: :oops:

TTFN :P
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Re: OOH-WAA!!

Post by Zondrae » Wed Feb 02, 2011 6:06 pm

Ok you Blokes,

I think that everyone could see the point(s).
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william williams

Re: OOH-WAA!!

Post by william williams » Wed Feb 02, 2011 6:35 pm

now ladies :roll: In the modern present days of now. Paul Robson sung a wonderfull song that sums it all up
from the film Show boat the name of the song :o SWING LOW SWEET :oops: opps sorry I forgot the rest of it :lol:

bw

Trisha Patterson

Re: OOH-WAA!!

Post by Trisha Patterson » Wed Feb 09, 2011 11:40 am

Not touching that one Bill!!!! :oops: :lol:
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Re: OOH-WAA!!

Post by Bellobazza » Mon Feb 28, 2011 7:06 pm

And here's Will, lagging behind as usual!
I just can't seem to keep a-breast of things at the moment. :cry:

Cheers, Will.
"Each poet that I know (he said)
has something funny in his head..." CJD

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