Homework week ending 1/4/2013 Touch my tears

Maureen K Clifford · Post by **Maureen K Clifford** » Tue Mar 19, 2013 6:44 pm

Love it Marty - well done - that last verse is pretty powerful

Forever young while we grow old

a very touching description that I suspect would be how so many people feel when a young life is taken before its time

Cheers

Maureen

Post by **warooa** » Tue Mar 19, 2013 8:19 pm

It fell out pretty good I reckon

Post by **Heather** » Tue Mar 19, 2013 8:46 pm

Yep, good to see you writing Marty.

Heather

Terry · Post by **Terry** » Tue Mar 19, 2013 11:37 pm

Yep I agree Marty,

That's a really good effort.

Terry

Bob Pacey · Post by **Bob Pacey** » Wed Mar 20, 2013 7:17 am

Not bad for an old cart driver Marty

Thought you had been a bit quiet of late

have not been told to sod off for a while.

Cheers Bob

Maureen K Clifford · Post by **Maureen K Clifford** » Wed Mar 20, 2013 10:04 am

Oh Marty you loved your carriage driving!

Do hope there has not been some disaster overcome you or the horses

Neville Briggs · Post by **Neville Briggs** » Wed Mar 20, 2013 1:46 pm

Keep going Marty, I'm sure you have plenty more to come out.

ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association