Not sure if I've done this right or not?
Inner Peace
You’ll find it still,
on saltbush plains,
or sun kissed hill.
And be you man or boy,
a trout filled stream,
will bring you joy.
With peacefulness to greet you there,
a restful place,
for you to share.
Terry
Inner Peace
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David Campbell
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Re: Inner Peace
Looks fine to me, Terry!
David
David
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Re: Inner Peace
Absolutely spot on Terry and very Australian themed to boot. Well done. Thank you for participating. Its good fun don't ya reckon?? 
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Re: Inner Peace
Hi Maureen & David,
Mine might be a bit corny - but as you say, a bit of fun anyway.
Cheers Terry
Mine might be a bit corny - but as you say, a bit of fun anyway.
Cheers Terry