Homework week ending 12-11-2012 The Unknown Soldier

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Maureen K Clifford
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Re: Homework week ending 12-11-2012 The Unknown Soldier

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Oct 24, 2012 4:09 pm

Gee Marty that's impressive - I love it. Full of emotion and telling the story simply as is its due for most of our diggers back then were simple and unpretentious men who fought for what they believed in - king, country and family. Well done mate IMO this is very good

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Re: Homework week ending 12-11-2012 The Unknown Soldier

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Oct 25, 2012 12:11 pm

Yep agree - it does - gives it a nice clean ending - good call

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