A Homework Masterpiece

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A Homework Masterpiece

Post by Bob Pacey » Wed Sep 12, 2012 9:18 pm

Tiny little particles
Hanging in the summer air

I see them every morning
So they really must be there.

I've tried in vain to catch one
Sometimes I almost think I will

Can such small things escape my grasp
Realisations such a bitter pill.

Atmospheric air mites floating on the breeze
Particles of dust escape our grasp at ease.

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Re: A Masterpiece

Post by Terry » Wed Sep 12, 2012 10:06 pm

I'm not going to argue with you Bob, but you haven't done a bad job with this one mate.

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Re: A Homework Masterpiece

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Sep 13, 2012 8:33 am

They do ! they do ! :lol:
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Re: A Homework Masterpiece

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Sep 13, 2012 9:30 am

Been cleaning out the sewage pit again Robere? :lol: :lol: :lol: or just doing the housework :roll:

I thought this was rather clever actually - good on you for having a go, I appreciate your effort ;)

This weeks homework seems to have sucked a few in :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Re: A Homework Masterpiece

Post by Bob Pacey » Thu Sep 13, 2012 9:31 am

Maureen you been looking over my shoulders at work,

YES I HAVE,

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:


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