Homework week ended 27th August - Rough sheds

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Re: Homework week ended 27th August - Rough sheds

Post by Bob Pacey » Tue Aug 14, 2012 10:29 pm

Rough edges and all Martin you certainly have a good turn of phrase .


Good one Mate, and I know you value my opinion greatly ;) ;) ;)


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Re: Homework week ended 27th August - Rough sheds

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue Aug 14, 2012 11:24 pm

Love it Marty - that really tugs at the emotions I reckon there would be a lot of old country blokes feel exactly like that
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Re: Homework week ended 27th August - Rough sheds

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Aug 15, 2012 10:44 pm

I'm presuming that is a wether jumping out of a chute :lol: :lol: :lol: rather than a whether you would or wouldn't write about it Marty ;)

I really like these lines - so full of pathos it is almost tangible
each afternoon I see the mob come grazing by the fence
I long to wrestle one more ewe although it makes no sense
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