Bewitched and Bedazzled

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Bewitched and Bedazzled

Post by Bob Pacey » Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:15 am

Gees Maureen I've gotta go to work so will tidy this up later.

Bewitched and Bedazzled


She bewitched and then bedazzled me
she swayed in her erotic sexy dance
but to take this beauty in my arms
I’d thought I’d never get the chance.

The small town of Boggabilla
had never seen such sights as these.
Lithe, with movements all alluring
A slim body made to please.

I was flying high on rum and cola
And out looking for romance
But could I summon up the courage
To ask for just one lingering dance.

Go on and have a go ya mug
My mates all urged me on
You’ll miss ya chance screamed Stewie
It’s near her final song.

Then as I made my way towards her
I quickly retreated in a trice
As Blue whispered "It’s a bloody fella"
Now that’s a friendship beyond price.

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Re: Bewitched and Bedazzled

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:54 am

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: so why is she here???? Did she dance off the workshop page??? Wrong place, you might want to shift her/him
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Re: Bewitched and Bedazzled

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Aug 17, 2011 1:52 pm

How did Blue come by that information ??? :roll: :roll:
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Re: Bewitched and Bedazzled

Post by Bob Pacey » Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:21 pm

Maureen I'll send you a picture which gave me the theme.

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