Hi Marty
I like this - the stabilizing balance of community elders is what is missing I think here in the city and a lot of the the kids to a degree are leading what appear to be aimless lives with no real direction - they don't seem to be a good fit in either white or black communities which is sad.
Typo here on - stateless
Enjoyed the read Mate - you are quick off the mark. Thank you for sharing
Cheers
Maureen
Homework for w/e 01.08.11 homesick for a foreign land
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Re: Homework for w/e 01.08.11 homesick for a foreign land
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I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
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Re: Homework for w/e 01.08.11 homesick for a foreign land
Good and quick. Liked it Marty.
Heather
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Re: Homework for w/e 01.08.11 homesick for a foreign land
What was the motovation for this one Marty ?
Seems an odd topic to pursue and I found whilst it reads well it was hard to grasp the meaning. Well for me it was anyway. Perhaps I'm missing something.
Bob
Seems an odd topic to pursue and I found whilst it reads well it was hard to grasp the meaning. Well for me it was anyway. Perhaps I'm missing something.
Bob
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!