Homework w/e 15.08.11 PRECIOUS AMBER

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Re: Homework w/e 15.08.11 PRECIOUS AMBER

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Aug 05, 2011 3:44 pm

You are not a pain Neville that is exactly what I wanted to know and to see it put down like that I understand it. I will go and have another look at this poem now and see if I can improve on it. Thank you for your always generous help Mate - it is appreciated.

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Re: Homework w/e 15.08.11 PRECIOUS AMBER

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Aug 05, 2011 3:57 pm

Fixed it Neville - is that better do you think?
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