homework ending 4/7/11 'My Poor Synapsis"

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homework ending 4/7/11 'My Poor Synapsis"

Post by Dave Smith » Fri Jun 24, 2011 9:07 pm

Trying to write bush poetry
with such a cotton brain.
I get such an awful headache
with my synapsis under strain.

Folks can write about saltbush
and it seems they Nevertire.
In my house they just whistle “stop”
your foaming at the ears is dire.

TTFN 8-)

Ps At synapsis read synapse. :oops:
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Re: homework ending 4/7/11 'My Poor Synapsis"

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Jun 24, 2011 9:29 pm

well that's what happens when you start doing poetry in a Bubble Bath Dave - it foams out everywhere :lol:
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Re: homework ending 4/7/11 'My Poor Synapsis"

Post by Neville Briggs » Sat Jun 25, 2011 9:08 am

I looked up SYNAPSIS. .." the side-by-side association of homologous paternal and maternal chromosomes during the first prophase of meiosis " HUUUUHHH.?????. :shock: :lol:
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Re: homework ending 4/7/11 'My Poor Synapsis"

Post by Dave Smith » Sat Jun 25, 2011 11:24 am

Well spotted Neville, not the wrong usage of the word just the wrong spelling.

Synapse: the point at which a nervous impulse passes from one neuron to another

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Re: homework ending 4/7/11 'My Poor Synapsis"

Post by Neville Briggs » Sat Jun 25, 2011 4:57 pm

Boy ! You're getting deep, Dave :D
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Re: homework ending 4/7/11 'My Poor Synapsis"

Post by william williams » Sat Jun 25, 2011 5:17 pm

Now Dave? are you sure the word is right couldn't it be :roll: MORON :o :lol:

Well spotted Neville, not the wrong usage of the word just the wrong spelling.

Synapse: the point at which a nervous impulse passes from one neuron to another

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