A soldiers last thoughts

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A soldiers last thoughts

Post by MadMick » Thu Mar 03, 2011 7:46 am

A soldiers last thoughts.



Darkness takes the fields of grey,
And stalls the soldiers mind,
Abandoned life amongst the fray,
And some they’ll never find.

Uniforms upon the dead,
Inform of rank and file,
Endless bleeding from ones head,
Yet more were cold a while.

Bullets piercing evening’s air,
Invade his frightened heart,
Matted blood restrains his hair,
His shoulder torn apart.

His only solace yet retrieved,
Implying hope was nigh,
A caring hand that he received,
That made the soldier cry.

Side by side throughout the night,
They leant against a wall,
Hand in hand they held on tight,
Not let the other fall.

The soldier talked of life and more,
Of women that he knew,
How green the grass before the war,
The glistening of the dew.

The tyre swing beside the drive,
And clanky iron gate,
And tea was always “half past five,
You’d better not be late.”

In broken tones he told of when,
His little boy had died,
Of how he always blamed himself,
But somehow never cried.

Endlessly the night was torn,
With other soldiers screams,
Incessantly their faith was worn,
Through hazy morphine dreams.

And as his eyes began to weep,
Belief began to fold,
A brief but painless little sleep,
Had left the stranger cold.

Mortality had taken flight,
Not muttered but a word,
He’d been dead now for most the night,
And not a word he’d heard.

Yet to the end the soldiers hand,
Had held his quiet friend,
As both were taken from this land,
True soldiers till the end.

©MadMick 02/03/2011

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Re: A soldiers last thoughts

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:12 am

Good to see you posting something Mick. Well done.
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Re: A soldiers last thoughts

Post by Dave Smith » Thu Mar 03, 2011 2:06 pm

This is the time of year when our thoughts turn to those lost in the field of conflict, our eyes fill with tears and our hearts swell with pride, in spite of all mother nature sends our way we live in the lucky country and are very thank full for all those who have made it so.

Mad Mick I like your poem very much.

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Re: A soldiers last thoughts

Post by warooa » Fri Mar 04, 2011 4:25 am

Harsh depiction, Mick yet powerful. Unfortunately too many went like this (and still do). yer right Dave . . how lucky we are.

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Re: A soldiers last thoughts

Post by David J Delaney » Mon Mar 07, 2011 8:50 pm

Another beauty Mick, love it eh!

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Re: A soldiers last thoughts

Post by MadMick » Tue Mar 08, 2011 10:40 am

Thanks gents.
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Re: A soldiers last thoughts

Post by MadMick » Fri Mar 11, 2011 8:49 am

Thanks Marty.
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Re: A soldiers last thoughts

Post by Zondrae » Fri Mar 11, 2011 1:18 pm

G'day Mick,

You know what I think of your ability as a writer so I will just say.. you've done it again. (where are the tissues)

When are you going to enter some stuff in competition? It would be so refreshing to see a new name in the top five.
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Re: A soldiers last thoughts

Post by MadMick » Sat Mar 12, 2011 3:30 pm

The day I win a beauty contest Zondrae!

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Re: A soldiers last thoughts

Post by Bob Pacey » Sat Mar 12, 2011 4:11 pm

We should be forever grateful for the sacrifice of those who gave us the freedom to live as we do.


well written Mick

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