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DOES MY BUM LOOK BIG IN THIS?

Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2015 6:51 am
by Cropduster
DOES MY BUM LOOK BIG IN THIS?

Does my bum look big in this?

Standing there before me is a vision to behold,
my love for her is bursting at the seams.
How do I show my gratitude to one that I entrust,
the keeper of my hopes and all my dreams?

Does my bum look big in this?

My heart is full to breaking, it is leaping from my chest.
My eyes are wide, my head begins to swoon.
My pride is overflowing knowing every head will turn
the moment that she walks into a room.

Does my bum look big in this?

No my darling, what you wear is just a perfect fit,
befitting a princess or yes, a queen
You shine, my dear, as brightly as the brightest movie star
That ever shone upon the silver screen

So do not ask me to compare, or look to find a fault
For there will never be a fault to find
For those who cannot see the vision I alone can see
I pity them for they are clearly blind.

Copyright (c) Allan Cropper December 2015

Re: DOES MY BUM LOOK BIG IN THIS?

Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2015 11:59 am
by alongtimegone
Aah Allan ... the questions they ask. But you're right. True love doesn't require the question because the answer will always be the same.
I enjoy reading your poems Allan. They're always interesting of topic and well written.
Wazza

Re: DOES MY BUM LOOK BIG IN THIS?

Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2015 12:42 pm
by Heather
Aaah, that is so sweet. Another enjoyable read Allan.

Heather :)

Re: DOES MY BUM LOOK BIG IN THIS?

Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2015 1:17 pm
by Neville Briggs
Women always say they appreciate honesty in a man. If that's what they want then......... :roll:

Re: DOES MY BUM LOOK BIG IN THIS?

Posted: Tue Dec 22, 2015 1:46 pm
by Heather
Love is blind☺

Re: DOES MY BUM LOOK BIG IN THIS?

Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2015 12:16 pm
by Catherine Lee
:P Yes Allan, very sweet and diplomatic. You do come up with some wonderful topics, and I too always enjoy reading your poems!