My Work of Art

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Vic Jefferies
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My Work of Art

Post by Vic Jefferies » Wed Sep 02, 2015 10:48 am

Today is our forty eighth wedding anniversary and I thought I might re post this to celebrate:


MY WORK OF ART
If I were to paint a picture
a portraiture of you,
these are the colours I would choose
to make that picture true:

I’d begin with lots of charity,
love and happiness,
brush in a dash of mercy
and loads of tenderness.

I would take some understanding
and mix in heaps of hope,
take out all the doubting
and replace it with tons of cope.

I’d blend a daub of worry
then paint in a colour bright,
fill the background in with courage
and etch in rays of light.

I would put in lots of caring
a splash of sadness too,
and emphasise the sharing
of the love I have for you.

Then I’d stand back from my easel
and soon I would decide
to eliminate the parts
indicating vanity or pride.

And when the work was finished
I ‘d place it in a frame,
made of gold and silvered,
and attach to it the name,
‘MY LOVE’
(And pray you felt the same.)

Vic Jefferies 1984

Neville Briggs
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Re: My Work of Art

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Sep 02, 2015 11:01 am

Congratulations Vic and "MY LOVE" :)
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

Vic Jefferies
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Re: My Work of Art

Post by Vic Jefferies » Wed Sep 02, 2015 11:05 am

Thank you Neville.

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alongtimegone
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Re: My Work of Art

Post by alongtimegone » Fri Sep 11, 2015 11:08 am

Love the poem and the idea. Colours have been used often in song to say the similar. One I really love is My Colouring Book and the best version ever in my opinion was by Kitty Kallen (going back a while now.) If you'd like to have a listen here is the youtube link. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oN9sUuZuqTU
Good poem Vic.
Wazza

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Catherine Lee
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Re: My Work of Art

Post by Catherine Lee » Sat Sep 12, 2015 11:01 am

Beautiful, Vic. Reminds me of the song, 'A Portrait of My Love'. Congratulations to you both.

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