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				A POET'S DELIGHT
				Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:10 pm
				by Vic Jefferies
				A POET’S DELIGHT       
The sun was sinking in the west
as the sun is prone to do,
The twinkling stars so high above
shone from the velvet blue,
The breeze was sighing in the trees
all was peace and quiet -
Just the perfect setting
to see what clichés I could write!
                                         Vic Jefferies
			 
			
					
				Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
				Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:11 pm
				by Heather
				Aah, Vic, I was just beginning to sit back and enjoy the scenery!  

   Good one!  
 
 
Heather  

 
			
					
				Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
				Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 6:15 pm
				by Maureen K Clifford
				 
   
   
   
  
 all in due time Vic actions speak louder than words.  Anything goes these days so why make a mountain out of a  

 molehill.
Good poem - very clever
Cheers
Maureen
 
			
					
				Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
				Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2011 7:32 pm
				by Dave Smith
				Sweet.
			 
			
					
				Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
				Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:08 pm
				by Vic Jefferies
				G'day Heather, Maureen and Dave, glad you enjoyed the little poem, but Maureen I am a having trouble understanding your cryptic comment.
Vic
			 
			
					
				Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
				Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:16 pm
				by Neville Briggs
				Maureen's using clichés to answer you Vic  
 
 
I liked the poem.
 
			
					
				Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
				Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:48 pm
				by Bob Pacey
				The quiet and write does not ring true for me Vic.
Love the poem and the pictures but that bit sticks out for me.
Robert
			 
			
					
				Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
				Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 11:24 am
				by Vic Jefferies
				I was pretty slow on the uptake there Neville but in my defence I plead advancing years.
Bob thought about "quiet and write and think you are right," but thought I might be able to sneak it through  because most people say quite not quye-et. 
Vic
			 
			
					
				Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
				Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 3:29 pm
				by Neville Briggs
				We'll accept advancing age Vic  
 
 
I reckon that in Aussie drawl 
,quoit rhymes with 
wroite, isn't that roight, just ask Julia Gillard.
 
			
					
				Re: A POET'S DELIGHT
				Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 8:01 am
				by manfredvijars
				Yep, woks for me too Vic, all depends on how you hold your tongue ... 
I've often wondered what pastry had to do with "Somewhere, over the Rainbow"