in the end

Maureen K Clifford · Post by **Maureen K Clifford** » Wed Feb 16, 2011 6:15 pm

Am I picking up the end of a relationship tinged with regret - and the ending not as one would have liked ???

I liked the brevity of it - matches the feeling if I am correct of an ending where all the words have been said and nothing more can be added.

I liked this Matt

Cheers

Maureen

Post by **Heather** » Wed Feb 16, 2011 8:22 pm

Written with your usual mystique and intrigue matt.

Heather

Post by **Zondrae** » Thu Feb 17, 2011 9:33 am

G'day,

I have this theory that you can find a Beatles lyric for every occasion..

"and in the end, the love you make is equal to the love you take."

Neville Briggs · Post by **Neville Briggs** » Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:26 pm

Good to see you posting something Matt. I must admit it is a bit hard for me to get my head around it, I have read it a number of times and it's not easy. It sounds good, I'll keep at it until I find the way. You've given me something to think on, that's the sign of a good poem I reckon.

vwalla · Post by **vwalla** » Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:56 pm

Matt
I sensed a vision of Warnie and Liz Hurley, Perhaps?!
Val W

Neville Briggs · Post by **Neville Briggs** » Thu Feb 17, 2011 7:37 pm

G'day Matt, got the message. I'll get back to you soon.

Ron · Post by **Ron** » Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:37 pm

Strewth old mate,
With those sobering well written lines I think I know where you're coming from, shall be in touch.
Ron.

ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

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