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Blackened Billy Bush Poetry Written Competition Results for 2010,
and
Golden Damper Bush Poetry Performance Competition Results for 2010

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The Tamworth Poetry Reading Group
sponsored by
Country Energy
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Performance Bush Poetry Competition

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        Peter Crawford                                 Peter Mace
The 2010 Country Energy Tamworth Bush Poetry Competition celebrated its pride in its claim of introducing new and very talented performers with two outstanding performances this year, which claimed 1st and 2nd places in the Original Section. Peter Crawford from Fitzroy Crossing presented his poem "Billy" last year, but needed to travel 4000 kilometres again this year to prove to us, and to himself, that his was a very special and important poem, and his strong and sincere performance placed him in first place.

Another newcomer, Heather Searles, reached the hearts of all those who attend committee meetings where all the work is done by a few. "The Meeting of Truth" was a very cleverly written poem given a polished performance.  It was a worthy 2nd placegetter and followed closely by Gabby Colquhoun's "The Hypochondriac".  Gabby combines an impeccable sense of timing and facial and body expressions with words that defy description; a breathtaking litany of complaints to delight any hypochondriac.  How she can remember the words is hard to imagine.

In the traditional or Established Works Section, Peter Mace won with the very poignant poem about man's inhumanity to man, "The Sandy Hollow Line" by Duke Tritton.  Second was Terry Regan with the haunting Veronica Weal poem "Where the Eagle's Shadow Falls", and Lisa Quast  gave a very touching and humorous performance of Sandy Thorne's poem "Jillarooing" for third place.

The Blazes Auditorium at Tamworth's West League Club provided an excellent venue for the performers to present their works under ideal conditions and sponsors, Country Energy, gave lots of back up support, even providing two beautiful young ladies, Tamworth's Country Music Queen and runner-up, to hand out the awards (and give kisses) to all the finalists and winners.

Jan Morris
Organiser
Country Energy Golden Damper Bush Poetry Competition Winners
Original
Place Contestant & Author From Poem
1 st
2 nd
3 rd
Peter Crawford
Heather Searles
Gabby Colquhoun
Fitzroy Crossing
Branxton NSW
Gloucester NSW
Billy
The Meeting of Truth
The Hypochondriac
Traditional or Established Works
Place Contestant From Poem
1 st
2 nd
3 rd
Peter Mace
Terry Regan
Lisa Quast 
Empire Bay NSW
Blaxland NSW
Armidale NSW
The Sandy Hollow Line
Where the Eagle's Shadow Falls
Jillarooing

Final 3 - Original Sectionor
Left to Right:
Gabby Colquhoun, Peter Crawford & Heather Searles

Final 3 - Traditional Sectiontr
Left to Right:
Lisa Quast, Peter Mace & Terry Regan

 

Heat finalists not in order
Heat Finalists Tuesday Heat Finalists Thursday
Original Traditional Original Traditional
Claire Reynolds
Graeme Johnson
Colin Driscoll
Lisa Quast
Terry Regan
Graeme Johnson
Ellis Campbell

Ellis Campbell
Frank Daniel
Peter Crawford
Roger Mathews
Kathy Edwards
Roger Mathews
Janeen Mapson
Heat Finalists Friday  
Original Traditional

Heather Searles
Terry Regan
Peter Mace
Gabby Colquhoun

Barry Ellem
Paddy O'Brien
Peter Mace


 

Written Bush Poetry Competition
Blackened Billy winners
Place Author From Poem
1 st
2 nd
3 rd
Ellis Campbell
Val Wallace
David Campbell
Dubbo NSW
Glendale NSW
Beaumaris Vic
The Arsonist
God’s Waiting Room
Unspoken Words
Highly Commended
 

Carolyn Eldridge-Alfonzetti
Ellis Campbell
Jim Brown
Jill Wherry
Max Merckenschlager
Dick Lewers
Ron Stevens
Jim Kent
Sally Perry
Will Moody

North Epping NSW
Dubbo NSW
Heathmont Vic
Windsor Gardens SA
Caloote SA
Blaxland NSW
Dubbo NSW
Port Fairy Vic
Port Lincoln SA
Bellingen NSW

The City Bride of Boorang
Another Digger Passed Away
Fromelles
The Day I Became an Australian
Making Murrundi
Wot’s Missing!
A Dinkum View of Peace
A Racing Tale
The Long Road North
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Winning Poem Blackened Billy 2010
THE ARSONIST  
© 2009 Ellis Campbell ec

His trembling fingers clasp a match,
against the box in eager hands –
sadistic madness gleams in light grey eyes.
A moment’s pause before the scratch
and sudden flare that soon expands
to tiny flames in tinder where it lies.

A curl of smoke – a licking flame
that creeps to fuel upon the ground,
discarded twigs and leaves of native trees.
It halts and leaps – devoid of aim –
its smoking spirals twist around
and waver in the hot air’s sluggish breeze.

It springs to catch a higher bush –
emitting puffs of blackened smoke –
and crackles as the flicking flames expand.
A change of wind – a sudden swoosh
that flings the blaze into an oak,
where it becomes a raging firebrand.

The fascinated arsonist –
entranced by magic of the flames –
retreats but cannot bear to leave the sight.
A lover in a secret tryst –
enchanted by his deadly games
that darkness will enhance to his delight.

It crawls and climbs, reducing shrubs
to billowed smoke and piles of ash –
spreads wider as the tangled timbers fall.
The arsonist retreats through scrubs –
enchanted by the timber’s crash –
engrossed in frenzied craze, he’s loving all.

A blaze of red against the sky
is visible for miles around –
a pall of smoke hangs heavy in the air.
The fire engines screaming by
emit their doleful, warning sound –
confusion reigns with fighters everywhere.

A fierce inferno’s crimson blaze
roars fuming up the canyon’s wall –
its fury knows no bounds nor fears restraint.
The fighters blunder through the haze –
aware they have no chance at all –
and pray for rain – although the chance seems faint.

A howling wind through gorges steep
drives fire in a frenzied rage –
exploding eucalypts creating gas.
The maddened flames, in swirling sweep –
that rain alone might now assuage –
force gallant fighters to retreat en masse.

The news is grim but still confused,
and loss of life is certain now –
one hundred homes are gone and more embraced.
Plus livestock, cars – the laws misused
must bear some blame. They disallow
essential clearing of the forest’s waste.

Another day and weary men
still fight against horrific odds –
four thousand hectares burnt to cinder’s mash.
The fury drives them back again –
fuelled by the wrath of weather gods –
they blunder through a maze of smoke and ash.

Now volunteers are surging forth,
and helicopters drone above –
another town is ravaged in its path.
More smoke appears a few miles north,
alarming those whose every love
is cloistered somewhere in its aftermath.

Oh, blessed rain that gently falls
brings dampness that deflates the glow –
makes ashen residue quagmire’s slush.
Intensity of fire stalls –
the sluggish flames are burning slow
to splutter out amidst the bottlebrush.

Who can assess the awful cost
of life and homes the fire’s beat –
the perished livestock, fences, sheds and cars?
No one can know how much is lost –
and nothing can in truth delete
the anguish and the lasting mental scars.

The arsonist is skulking where
he hopes no one might realise
the evilness that wracks his worthless soul.
His very presence fouls the air –
a grim assassin in disguise,
inflicting torture none could e’er condole.

Police report a suspect near –
perhaps arrest is imminent?
What kind of sentence fits this ghastly crime?
Who understands a mind so queer?
We know police will hound the scent –
but will some drowsy judge reduce his time?


THE BLACKENED BILLY VERSE COMPETITION 2010

Judge's Comments
This is my seventh year of adjudicating the Blackened Billy Awards, and I have to say the task does not become easier.  I am constantly amazed by the high standard of the written entries received and I continue to achieve great personal delight in reading and assessing the quality of the entries.

And, of course, the 2010 entries were once again of exceptionally high standard.  Jan rang me about a week before entries were due to close and told me that my job would be much easier this year, having received only 170 entries, and naturally she was a little concerned at the response.  She needn’t have worried because there were a further 100 entries received in the last week.  And so my job was to become just that little bit more difficult.

Suffice to say, a flood of quality entries were there for adjudication.  I was amazed by the standard, the selection of topics, and the diligence and creative effort by most writers.  This year, my emotions were affected by beautiful imagery, balanced meter and rhythm, alternate rhyme, free verse, and of course that wonderful imagination by many writers.

Once again, it was very difficult to eliminate entries for the final 13 place getters.  I felt emotionally drained when having to discard first class work from the final selection of 45.  A lot of soul searching was done beforehand, I can assure you.

My congratulations again to Jan for her tireless efforts in the administration of the Blackened Billy Verse Competition; to all of the entrants, thank you for your great writing and please continue to submit your talented and creative work.

 

FIRST PLACE:
THE ARSONIST  by  ELLIS CAMPBELL, Dubbo NSW
This is a very cleverly constructed entry, in which the writer illustrates a major tragedy in this country, the terrible and grief-filled destruction and aftermath of bushfires.  It is indeed a continuing and despicable problem with many lives and property destroyed by a frightening terrorist, the Arsonist.  This entry moved me to a point where I could virtually smell the smoke, experience the flames, the terror and the tragedy.  The writer has used an alternative rhyming pattern to achieve the necessary stress and sound effects in each of the six line stanzas.  The writer has created a vivid and dramatic insight into one of our most disturbing problems.  This is the work of a gifted writer and worthy winner of the Blackened Billy for 2010.

 

SECOND PLACE:
GOD’S WAITING ROOM  by  VAL WALLACE, Glendale NSW
This was another extremely sensitive entry, depicting the sadness and emotion within the walls of most nursing homes.  The writer has captured the mental and deep-seated personal tragedies experienced by most inhabitants, especially losing loved ones to the horror of war.  The writer may have experienced the trauma and deep emotions in a personal family attachment.

I was greatly impressed with the clever balance of dialogue, the construction and timing of the narrative, and the message outlined in thought provoking detail.  The introductory verse by Lawson was appropriate.

 

THIRD PLACE:
UNSPOKEN WORDS by DAVID CAMPBELL,  Beaumaris, Vic.
This entry is the work of a wonderful writer.  I experienced deep and meaningful emotion in reading this descriptive message.  I was overwhelmed by the passion and the sorrow in the narrative.  The writer has delivered a deep seated and poignant message involving a loved one, victimized by nature’s cruel hand.  The writer has woven a brilliant narrative with clever word power and flowing sentiment.

 

Keith Jones
Adjudicator

 

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